Archive for March, 2006

Victim - P6

Secret is an untold story. They thought they know each other. Sadly, they don’t.

R – What should we do right now? Do you guys think that Mandy is the murderer?

G – I’m not sure about this but she must be hiding something from us.

A – Maybe that day, Mandy killed Ryan. Then, she killed Josh too because he knew!

G – Alex, we still don’t know anything.

R – I don’t think Mandy would do anything like this.

A – Then why she disappeared? She had been keeping secrets on her own. Her dad married Josh’s mum. She had been dating Josh and Ryan. What else we don’t know!

R – How you sure that she dated Josh and Ryan?

A – The two photos are the proof!

G – Stop it! It’s late now. We meet again tomorrow and talk about it, ok?

R – But I have something to do tomorrow, can we meet at night?

A – Me too.

G – Fine, tomorrow night.

They leave the house and go back to their own home. The next day, they do their things separately and secretly. Rose goes to Josh’s apartment. Kevin’s waiting for her.

R – This is the balance. You didn’t talk anything right?

K – Don’t worry, no one know that you lived next to that poor guy.

R – Keep this as a secret! Don’t let anyone know!

Alex goes to a graveyard. No one is there except him. He walks and stops in front of a gravestone. He cries.

A – Josh, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to hurt you….I’m sorry…..

George stays at home on that day. He opens the letter that he got from Josh’s room. He throws it to the fire and let it burns.

G – Now, no one will ever know what had happened. I’m sorry, Josh.

Suddenly, George’s mobile rings. He picks it up and shock.

G – Mandy?

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Thanks for ur support…

I’m really glad and happy to receive some comments from my friends about my series…thanks a lot…i really hope that many will see it…i had punch my brain to plot out the whole series….and i already finished edit it…there are total 8 parts of the Victim series…actually i already think of the basic idea of the new series…it will out when the time is ready……now better pay attention for Victim first…if u know who is the murderer…let me know…but no gift la…

However, this is the teaser for the next series….

We look at the past, Past is always unforgetable

We hope for the future, Future is always unpredictable

We live in the present, Present is always unnoticeable

Diary…a book with memory…that will not fade away….

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Victim - P5

Four of them on their way for their own mission. They want to know the truth but what they discover are just dark secrets that make their life complete. As they try to peel off those lies, they become weaker because they can’t deal with the reality. The reason why they fail to understand Josh is because there are secrets hidden by each of them. Rose and Alex are at the old place waiting for the others. They remain silent but they look nervous. Rose sits at the chair with her hands shaking while Alex keeps on wondering at the same circle. Then, George arrives.

G – Where’s is Mandy?

R – George, listen to us! Alex and I find out something.

G – What did you two find out?

R – Josh did have a girlfriend but Ryan had affair with her. When Josh knew, he had a fight with his brother. No one knew what had happened between them except Josh’s girlfriend who was a witness. The next day, Ryan was reported missing.

A – Josh’s friends say that there is a girl who lives beside Josh’s room but they don’t know the girl. Maybe that girl is the one Kevin referred to.

G – I know who Josh’s girlfriend is. She was the one who reported to the police that Ryan was missing. Mandy is Josh’s girlfriend. I think we better go and look for her.

They rush to Josh’s apartment but no one is there. Then, they go to Mandy’s house. It is unlocked. So they walk into her house. They couldn’t find anything or any signs that show Mandy are running away. Rose sees a diary book on her bed. George and Alex join Rose to have a look. However, pages with words were torn off. Only two photos are left. One is Mandy with Josh and another one is Mandy with Ryan.

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Victim - P4

They continue to chat but Rose and Alex don’t dare to ask much. Four of them gather around to share the information but Rose and Alex don’t speak out about the relationship between Mandy’s father and Josh’s mum. Then, they split up again to find more. George and Rose go to the doctor who treated Josh.

G – Hello, are you Dr. Mel whose Josh’s physiologist?

Mel – Yes, may I help you?

R – What’s wrong with Josh?

Mel – Sorry, you should know that I can’t reveal my patients’ details.

G – Yes, we know but we need to know why he did this to himself. Please, let us know.

Mel – Well, I can’t tell you what happened but I can tell you my opinion about him. He never said anything that made him furious but I guessed he had some relationship problems.

R – You mean girlfriend’s problem?

Mel – That is what I thought but it seems to be a more complicated problem.

G – Such as?

Mel – That, I can’t tell.

George and Rose try to dig more info but Dr. Mel just shut her mouth. At the same time, both of them are suspecting Dr. Mel because she seems to be keeping a lot of Josh’s secret. They leave the clinic. In a sudden, George receives call from Mandy.

M – George, we just find out that Josh has a brother who was reported missing.

G – What?!

M – However, his brother, Ryan, was a suspect of a murder case. We know that Josh’s mum married to a man right? Ryan killed him and now no one can find out where is he.

G – Ok, now we split up again.  Rose will go and find out more from Josh’s mum. You go to Josh’s apartment. Alex will go to meet Josh’s friends. I will go to the police department. Hope to find out more. After that, we meet at the same time same place.

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Lyric for my fren YE

This is my rewrite lyric for my fren YE (OT: JoeyYung – Snow赤地雪)

冬樱

雾已散开 就让光彩 照射进来 我的世界不只一片空白

秋走冬来 碎花落在 地面脚踝 季节对我而言并不是一种伤害

*哭了笑了痛了好了时间还留着(地球还转着)

即使生了老了病了死了也免不了的

所以我明白了 应该要如何 珍惜每一刻

当蛹慢慢脱壳 让我们思想改革*

#纷飞(记忆到处分飞) 风在空气巡回

趁着雪花未掉下狂吹 演化成为冬天樱飘的美

陶醉 同时无情积成堆 热情被冰封 凝固眼泪

等春晖 溶化我的罪#

雾已散开 就让色彩 涂鸦未来 我的世界正在重建破坏

秋走冬来 碎花记载 谁胜谁败 季节对我而言令我了解凡事都有例外

Repeat (*) #

白雪在夏天是水 跟随河流进入海内 由鱼儿来陪

Repeat (#)

让自己体会 爱不同滋味

其实歌词是说我们无法改变即将发生的事,唯有改变我们对那件事的想法,我们才会变乐观和开心一点。

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Victim - P3

Both Rose and Alex are standing right in front Josh’s house. They stand at there for a while then Rose presses the door bell. The door is opened by Josh’s mum. She welcomes them to come in and have a seat.

R – Well, Aunt….you look….great….

Josh’s mum(JM) – I know what you want to say. I had promised Josh that I won’t live in miserable. I gave myself one day to cry and be sad. After that, I will spend my life as usual. I know Josh will be proud of me.

A – Aunt, before Josh….did you notice anything weird about him?

JM – Well, he only came back here once in a while. He always talks about those happy thins that happened in his life. But at that time, I knew something had happened. He went for physiologist. I received the call and asked him but he said nothing.

R – Aunt, we never get to know Josh’s father and he never talks about it.

JM – Oh, his real father died before he was born. He get used to the life without father, probably this is why he never talked about his father. But three years ago, I married to a man. At first, he seems to be okay with my marriage but since the death of this man, he smiled less.

A – We’re so sorry.

JM – Never mind. You guys knew this man!

A & R – Who?

JM – Mandy’s father.

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